"Everywhere she went, eyes looked away. But it was the most visible she'd ever felt."
I think that Tally was embarrassed that people wouldn't look at her, but she was also happy that she was getting attention. Everyone knew she was supposed to be gone, so they knew there was something wrong. Tally was sure of it. She also knew that people were paying attention to her, but it was the wrong kind of attention. It was the attention you get when you pee your pants when you're grown up. People are laughing at you, but they also feel kind of bad for you. No one wants that kind of attention, my brother told me so.

Come on, why don't you guys comment. This was my best one so far!
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